四个故事

so yesterday i was talking to vanessa during oral prep about this story i wrote years ago on holiday in china (probably around year 3? year 2?) which i ran across while i was looking through my drawers looking for a red pen.

it turns out that it was much shorter than what i recall it to be ... i thought it was a pretty long story but when i read it just then it was ... amazingly short. maybe i thought it was a longish story when i wrote it but now what with how much we're meant to write in exams it seems ... not so.

here it is word for word (grammar mistakes and all):

LOVE That is FAKE (then i drew a heart with a heart inside it and another heart inside that etc ...)

In a school named 'Stoneybrook Elementary School', there was two two group of people in it.
One group has bad people and the other has good people.
These groups have about 445 people in each group.
The bad people are lucky to be in this school because this is a high rated school so that you can sleep in the school if you want to.
A girl in the bad group and a boy in the good group decided to go to Rockmate Land on Sunday 12pm but they did not know the other group is going as well.
When they reached to the train station, all the bad people passed the yellow line when the train was coming.
The good people each rescued one bad person but when they were doing it, they accidentally looked at each others eyes and the bad people turned into good people.

end of story. and no, i didnt write end of story in the story. well yeah. i have no idea why i started a new paragraph with every line. haha when i'm bothered i'll probably take a photo of the little sheet of paper i wrote it on ohohoho.